This week's assignment:
The premise of the contest is to write a piece of flash fiction - it should be no more than 600 words and should take no longer than 3 minutes to read aloud. And the requirement for this particular one is a character MUST tell a joke and a character MUST cry. One character can do both.
The Result:
Maggie had a thousand errands to do. Just thinking about them all made her a little bit sick. And she knew with 3 year old Ben in tow, it would take...oh about eleventy billion times longer. They had been sitting in traffic for about 20 minutes. And with each second that passed, Maggie felt even more overwhelmed. She never had enough time.
As she raced through the list over and over again trying to make sure she didn't forget anything, Ben chattered non-stop in the back seat. He needed very little encouragement to keep his side of the conversation going. An occasional, "mmhhmm" or "yup" from Maggie, and he was off and running again.
Maggie had become a master at tuning out the running commentary. There always seemed to be something more pressing, more important, just more. She happened to glance in the rearview mirror and caught sight of Ben. And she saw him. Really saw him. Slowly at first, then faster and faster, big, fat tears rolled down her cheeks. All she had ever wanted was to be a mother and now she was letting things like the dry cleaning and getting the right pitcher for her Bunco party overshadow her sweet little boy.
She inched her way to the side of the road, turned the car off and let the tears come. How had she gotten to the point that she took Ben for granted? How could she have let all these silly tasks become more important? Maggie thought she may never stop crying.
“Mama? Mama? MAMA!”
“Yes love, I’m sorry. Mama is just…”
“Mama? Guess what? Knock, knock”
“Knock, knock? Ummm…who’s there?”
“POOP!”
And then Ben exploded in laughter. The absolute joy rolled off him in waves. Maggie sat very still for a minute, and then she giggled. And then she chuckled. And then she roared with laughter. Just she and her amazing Ben on the side of the road gasping for breath, it was exactly what she’d always wanted.
Jackie · 746 weeks ago
Callie Feyen · 746 weeks ago
Great post! You reminded me of all I ever wanted to be as well, and now I'm thinking that going grocery shopping this afternoon might not be as important as doing puzzles on the floor with my girls.
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Tracie · 746 weeks ago
I need to be reminded of this.
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Mandyland · 746 weeks ago
I think this is a story that every mother can relate to. How many times have I found myself in a similar situation and then had to take a hard look at my priorities.
Great post.
(Visiting from TRDC.)
rubysu87 65p · 746 weeks ago
I do this all the time. I realize I'm not listening to my son, and then when I tune back in, I'm always so glad I did. Glad, and more than a little swamped with guilt.